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Copy Test: “Write If You Want Work” (UPDATE)

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The winningest “copy test” in advertising history

In 2016, I was having lunch with European marketing magnate and world class value investor, Norman Rentrop.

Herr Rentrop

Norman is remarkably down to earth, so you might not take him for a billionaire… UNTIL you spend a few hours with him, observe his insatiable curiosity about all things and take in his incisive insights about business and life that puts mere mortals like me to shame.

Anyway, Norman asked if I had any ideas for scouting copywriting talent in his native Germany and several other European countries where his companies have a presence.

Bookalog that launched a thousand copy careers

The first thought that leaped to mind was to start his own writer’s guild in the mold of the American Writers and Artists Institute.

This AWAI bookalog mailed for FOUR solid years and launched more copywriters into the business than you can shake a stamp at.

This is like having your own sporting franchise “farm team,” but it takes some lead time before this approach turns out enough lean and mean ad writers.

Then I remembered the famous copy test which J. Walter Thompson ran as full page ads in the 1980s. It was the brainchild of the international bestselling thriller writer, James Patterson, then a copy chief at JWT.  I learned all about in an interview I did with mystery writer, Chris Grabenstein, one of the first candidates hired through this remarkable copy test.

People from all over the advertising world showed up in the comments, before my blog went into a long hiatus. Mea culpa!

“Write If You Want Work”

“Have you ever wondered how you could get a job as an advertising copywriter? Have you ever wondered if you could get a job as an advertising copywriter? This is your chance to find out. With this copy test. Eight entertaining and involving assignments that should stimulate and challenge you to do the thing you do best. Write.”

This was the opening of an unusual ad.

In 1984, the mega ad agency, J. Walter Thompson, ran this full page copy test in the New York Times, entitled, “Write If You Want Work.”

The candidates who took them up were given eight unusual writing assignments.

My favorite is #6.

“You’ve heard the story about the man who made a fortune selling refrigerators to Eskimos. In not more than 100 words, how would you sell a telephone to a Trappist monk, who is observing the strict Rule of Silence? (But he can nod acceptance at the end.)”

Ten people passed and joined JWT’s 85 member creative team.

Sorry, neither I, nor perhaps even JWT, have the winning submissions to this unusual series of exercises. Just reading the test will uncork your creative thinking bottle.

I’m not sure if Norman put any of these to work, but I shall ask him next time we meet on Zoom over a meal.

Filed Under: Direct Response Copywriting Swipe File

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  1. Matt says

    May 22, 2009 at 2:53 pm

    Interesting tidbit:

    The contact person on this ad is Jim Patterson. At the time he was the creative director at JWT but now he is James Patterson, best-selling author of Kiss the Girls, Along Came A Spider and other thrillers.

  2. Marilyn says

    May 23, 2009 at 4:28 am

    Thanks, Matt…

    An interesting personal tidbit:

    No wonder I was drawn to those ad assignments. As you mentioned, Patterson is the author of Kiss the Spider, Along Came a Spider and Double Jeopardy, which were brought to the movie screen. The first two starred one of my all time favorite actors – Morgan Freeman – and the third film was directed by Bruce Beresford, who director Morgan Freeman in Driving Miss Daisy – one of my all time favorite films.

    An interesting bit of synchronicity 🙂

  3. LARRY says

    May 25, 2009 at 9:27 am

    LOVED the insanely curious email subject headline “Sell telephones to monks?” had to click on it.

    Like DeNiro said to Billy Crystal in “Analyze This,” Lawrence, “You’re Good, man, you’re good!”

    I spend hours a month trying to come up with headlines like that!
    regards,

  4. Chris Grabenstein says

    July 23, 2009 at 8:04 am

    Hi! I was the first writer hired as a result of the test! I had done improv comedy for five years prior so the test was a lot of fun for me.

    Now I am attempting to follow Mr. Patterson’s footsteps and am writing mysteries and thrillers!

  5. admin says

    July 23, 2009 at 1:49 pm

    Hi Chris,

    Thanks for taking the time to comment and actually connect us with this most interesting moment in advertising history.

    I find it fascinating that you had a stand-up comedy background because so many of our successful direct response copy colleagues have had door-to-door or at least face-to-face sales experience.

    Certainly, doing stand-up demands one can think on his feet, like all good writers are supposed to. God knows, it hurts a shade more being booed off stage than merely flubbing a sales pitch.

    Good luck following in the footsteps of your multi-talented mentor!

    Lawrence

  6. Cathy says

    July 24, 2009 at 4:43 am

    So Chris..just how DO you sell telephones to monks?! 😉

  7. Chris Grabenstein says

    July 24, 2009 at 10:46 am

    Well, remember this was 1984. Computer modems were these cradles you had to jam a telephone handset into.

    So, I told the Trappist that the rest of the world had caught up to him: “We’ve stopped talking and started communicating.”

    Buy purchasing a phone and a modem, he would be connected to Monkmail a way to stay connected with Trappists all over the world.

    Weird how it really came true…

  8. admin says

    July 24, 2009 at 4:54 pm

    Did a follow-up post on this.
    http://www.infomarketingblog.com/write-2/

    “Monkmail”…brilliant!

  9. Billy Bloom says

    March 8, 2010 at 3:06 pm

    I also was among the 10 people hired. If you’d like, I still have a copy of my submission–just let me know. I ended up hating advertising, and I went on to own a volleyball league, start a website, and now I’m back in school to become a teacher.

  10. admin says

    March 9, 2010 at 9:31 am

    Hi Billy,

    Thanks for getting in touch. 2 down — you and Chris G. — now, only 8 to go! We’d love to see your submission. Just send it to lawrence@infomarketingblog.com

  11. Taylor M. Chambers says

    March 27, 2010 at 11:03 am

    Never saw that ad – I was by that time marketing director in a different field. In the sixties I was a copywriter in San Francisco for BBDO and later JWT – my heroes were William Bernbach, David Ogilvy, and Leo Burnett – it was a wonderful, crazy time – we flew first class – enjoyed hotel rooms with twin king-sized beds – and ate well – the highlight of my career was working for an Irish ad agency and doing a campaign for a Jewish resort in Southern California (From Mishmash to Hoo Hah in 90 minutes!). Also did freelance copywriting in Europe for 12 – 13 years. What a bunch of super sensitive, out-sized egos! You’d have thought our text was sacred! I’m 82 and in Pittsburgh of all places and I’d do it again. I’d do it right now, in fact. God bless.

  12. Akash Singh says

    April 29, 2010 at 10:19 pm

    Hi Billy
    I too would love to see your submission , my mail-id is aakashsingh@gmail.com .
    And thanks to all for sharing the infromation . Its invaluable for ad industry aspirats like me.

    Just wish there was some sort of copy test in India .

  13. Troy Torrison says

    September 9, 2010 at 10:15 am

    I entered this ad all those years ago while in college in Illinois and I came up with MONKNET as I recall and drew little pictures of modems. They didn’t offer me a job, though I did get a ‘thank you’ letter. I must thrown own the copy I had of my submission in one of my many moves I’ve made over the years. As I type this I’m currently working freelance as a copywriter at JWT in New York. Only took me a quarter century to get here!

  14. Herb Feuerhake says

    November 28, 2011 at 9:00 am

    I was one of about twenty (or so I was told) who interviewed for the JWT jobs, based upon my submission (there were about 2000 entrants, as I recall). But I didn’t get hired; I was a lawyer, and I think they thought I wasn’t serious about jumping professions (little did they know!!). My sales pitch for the telephone to the monk involved putting the phone in his room, where a ringing telephone would provide a test of his ability to avoid answering it!

  15. Herb Feuerhake says

    November 28, 2011 at 9:02 am

    P.S. I think the HR person at the time was “Mindy”; does anybody remember her?

  16. tosan says

    May 9, 2012 at 2:26 am

    hi, Billy. i am a copy writer. and got fascinated by the trappist monk story. I’d love so much to get your submission.

    this is my email ad tosanamietoi@yahoo.com
    Thanks Tosan

  17. nicole says

    June 13, 2012 at 11:58 pm

    hi billy,

    i also would be interested in seeing your entry regarding the monk and the telephone. please do send yours at whathaveyoureadtoday@gmail.com. thanks in advance!

    regards,
    nicole

  18. Hemaabh Khurana says

    July 2, 2012 at 4:02 pm

    Respected Billy
    Hi , i am a management student and i have applied for internship in a few agencies in advertising. I want to try out for copy-writing.

    It would be of great help and hell lot of appreciated if i could have a look at your submission. Please help.
    My email id is hemaabhkhurana@yahoo.com

    Regards
    Hemaabh Khurana

  19. Wesley Young says

    March 26, 2018 at 2:32 pm

    Selling a telephone to a monk taking a vow of silence. That’s got to be some pretty sacrilegious copy.

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