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Do You Have the Courage to Break Conventional Thinking?

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Eugene Schwartz Ad #70One of the best pieces of advice about the role of integrity in copywriting and marketing comes from Eugene Schwartz. There are bountiful examples he practiced as he preached.

Gene said:

“[The copywriter] must never write an ad just to please the client…or to make money…or meet a deadline…and never, never write an ad for a bad product.”

Turning a deaf ear to critics should be added to this list.

Several decades before he made the above remark, he was offered $7,000 to write a real estate promotion — a hefty sum for a young ad writer in the 1950s. Even though Gene was financially strapped and had a family to feed, he turned it down because he didn’t believe in the offer.

Gene’s moral compass pointed firmly north, yet it didn’t save him from being assailed by the critics who said his claims were over-the-top, trumped up.

As marketers, we should rejoice in this.

No statue was ever erected to a critic.

The armchairs of the Western World are filled with those playing it safe, never boarding the boat, let alone rocking it.

As marketers and business people, we should run legally and ethically compliant businesses and…

Break conventional thinking like a toothpick!

Gene’s ads were about crossing the chasm of fear and doubt in one leap. It can’t be done in two.

Take the 1967 ad he wrote for Alan Watts’ The Book. Gene’s company was the first to publish it and he, of course, promoted it via his patented “big promise” advertising.

The headline Gene used was: “This book could remove your fear of death forever.”

“The Book” is not only an enlightening read, 45 years after it was written, but one that has as much impact on its audience today as it did initially. It’s just short of 5-Stars on Amazon.com, with 112 reviewers weighing in. The self-help  and spiritual categories are two of the most EVERGREEN — and these buyers in 2012 prove it.

What about Gene’s advertising methods? Are they still valid and effective today?

Much of the power and grandeur of Gene’s giant promise advertising came from scrupulous research and knowing the product inside and out. The rest must be chalked up to an intangible genius that let him crank out a blockbuster ad, layout and all, in one short workday.

Like the ad he wrote for The Book.

While a shade esoteric for the typical direct response offer, it’s a link in a 40 year chain that’s achieved everything from:

  • Selling $50 million worth of one mail order book – The Encyclopedia of Natural Healing
  • Clearing the shelves of plant nurseries from coast to coast through the power of space advertising
  • Launching a $100 million per annum company – Boardroom Reports

It’s also proof positive that just about anything can be successfully sold using direct response advertising, provided you believe in the product and serve up the right offer to the right audience.

Here’s a PDF of this evergreen ad. Right click on the ad and ‘save target as’ or ‘save link as’ to download it to your computer

I love the qualifying “trick” he uses in the the third paragraph, as well as the tantalizing snippets from the book included later in the ad.

“…If you do not want to discuss or confront the question of death – then please turn away from this page now. The rest of the ad will simply be confusing and destructive for you.”

As you read this ad, keep in mind Gene was a proponent of ugly or asymmetrical layouts, which he said outperformed pretty layouts through his numerous tests.

Rigorous testing of layouts — especially ugly verses pretty — is something most advertisers neglect today.


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Comments

  1. Dima says

    March 16, 2009 at 10:33 pm

    Wow! what an ad that was… I felt sucked into the page by the copy and the hook at the end of the first chunk of body copy.

  2. John says

    May 14, 2009 at 7:10 pm

    If you think you have seen this before, think again! Break conventional thinking like a toothpick… don’t be
    fooled. Simple though it is, it is incredibly powerful,
    guaranteed to work (if you actually use it) and immune to changes!

  3. Georjina says

    May 27, 2009 at 9:53 am

    I love this ‘to the point’ learning phase and my swipe file just keeps getting bigger:)

    Also going to buy the book, the ad sold me!

  4. mario francis barreto says

    July 11, 2009 at 4:25 am

    ALL of Eugene M.Schwartz’s ads are sure fire result getting ads. Not an iota of doubt about their selling power. I know this very well as I have used his techniques as a copywriter. Iused to correspond with him during the late sixties and early seventies. He even sent me an autographed copy of his now famous book, “Breakthrough Advertising” &another one, also autographed by him entitled “Sound of One Man Thinking”. God bless his soul and may he rest in peace!

  5. LegalFormsLawyer says

    September 7, 2009 at 3:57 pm

    You’ve given us some powerful information to chew on and it certainly does help to change conventional thinking about how one should formulate a winning advertisement. Many thanks again, I’ve bookmarked the page for future referrence.

  6. Phillip Lemarque says

    October 15, 2009 at 8:52 am

    I have been doing some marketing for the Restaurant Industry for years. E.Schwartz’s ads are certainly powerful. Thanks

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