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Do You Have the Courage to Break Conventional Thinking?

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Eugene Schwartz Ad #70One of the best pieces of advice about the role of integrity in copywriting and marketing comes from Eugene Schwartz. There are bountiful examples he practiced as he preached.

Gene said:

“[The copywriter] must never write an ad just to please the client…or to make money…or meet a deadline…and never, never write an ad for a bad product.”

Turning a deaf ear to critics should be added to this list.

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(Insurance Lead Gen) $600.00-a-month TAX-FREE CASH WHEN YOU GO TO THE HOSPITAL

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This was a barn burner of a lead generator in the late 1960s and early 1970s with insertions all across the US.

Would the offer for $3,100 tax free cash during a hospital stay appeal to most people reading such an ad today?

Indeed it would since that’s the equivalent in today’s inflation adjusted dollars.

I have no doubt such an ad would make a mint for whoever had the moxie (or memory) to run something similar.

Problem is, for the most part, insurance companies are too sluggish and entrenched in their ways to give this a shot in 2012.

This ad is a timeless masterpiece that could be repurposed in several different areas today.

Notice the pre-head, “New York Times Readers.”

This is lost print ad response booster. Heck, print advertising as a whole is a lost medium today, with very few players who truly know what they’re doing.

(Insurance Lead Gen) $600.00-a-month TAX-FREE CASH WHEN YOU GO TO THE HOSPITAL

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TriAdalean Ad: Controversial “Diet Pill” Hits Market Consumers Excited… Experts Concerned!

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This full pager for the diet pill, TriAdalean, targeting women and weight loss is making the rounds in the USA Weekend, the National Enquirer, The Globe and Parade.

“If you’re having a hard time finding a box of TriAdalean diet pills at your local CVS or GNC, you’re not alone.

This controversial, high-powered diet pill is selling out even before it hits the shelf. Some waiting lists are more than two weeks long with women outnumbering men by about twenty to one.”

There’s an interesting interjection of the hidden benefit, extra energy, as “legalized speed,” from the voice of a critic.

“This stuff is nothing more than legalized speed… I would venture to say that just as many women use them as energy boosters and mood enhancers as those who use them to lose weight,” said one critic who wished to remain anonymous.

$79 for a 30 day supply. There’s a toll-free number for ordering but this is primarily about print pushing retail.


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ARE YOU ABOUT TO BE CAUGHT ON THE WRONG SIDE OF THE 1980 GOLD PLAY?

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ARE YOU ABOUT TO BE CAUGHT ON THE WRONG SIDE OF THE 1980 GOLD PLAY? OR MISS IT ALTOGETHER BY NOT READING THE JANEWAY LETTER?

NO ONE BUT ELIOT JANEWAY HAS BEEN RIGHT— AND MARKET EVENTS HAVE MADE HIM RIGHTER BY THE DAY— ABOUT THE INTERNATIONAL POLITICAL ACTIONS THAT MADE GOLD TAKE OFF AGAIN.

He caught the gold bugs and their favorite analysts and chart-pointers on the bear side—the wrong side! — of their own market for the second time this year. Now they’re all getting back on the Janeway bandwagon for the second time this year. Their direction is finally right, though their timing has been consistently wrong, and their selectivity predictably reckless. What else is new?

The right way — the only way — to direct, select and time market moves, not just in gold, is to master the political calculations needed to make successful investment decisions. And Eliot Janeway is the master of how the action in gold holds the key to the performance of all other markets—especially silver— in this critical political year for the United States.

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Join the world’s greatest authors in the collecting experience of a lifetime

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They’re the world’s most celebrated authors. Their books have been read by millions of people throughout the world. But until now only the pri­vileged have been able to acquire the modern master­pieces of our greatest writers in prized First Editions. And fewer still have been able to collect First Editions that have been personally signed by their world-famous authors.

That’s the unsurpassed collecting pleasure that awaits you as a Privileged Member of The Signed First Edition Society.

Each month, you’ll be able to automatically acquire a newly published First Edition—the limited first printing of a major literary work. Each volume will be luxuriously bound in premium leather. Embellished with 22 karat gold. And personally hand-signed by its acclaimed author.

Think about it. If you had belonged to the Society last year, you would have had the opportunity to acquire a Signed First Edition of Raymond Carver’s “Where I’m Calling From” … a personally signed copy of Anne Tyler’s “Breathing Lessons* . .. Robertson Davies’  “The Lyre of Orpheus,” also signed by the author.. and other modern literary classics by some of the most distinguished authors of our time—Iris Murdoch, Alison Lurie, and Nobel Prize winner Isaac Bashevis Singer.

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RETRACTION: $12 Million Dollar Direct Mail Letter (Dan Rosenthal)

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One of my subscribers, who’s among the top five financial copywriters today, put me on the spot about the numbers from this promotion.

It’s a romantic notion to think that Dan Rosenthal rode off into the sunset with millions in royalties from just a few days of work, but it seems unlikely.

I’d gotten this info from one of Clayton Makepeace’s contributors a few years ago and taken it as fact.

Lesson? Trust but verify! Trust but verify!

This is a very good letter but not of blockbuster caliber and the numbers do not seem to add up.

So, I retract everything beneath the line.

And by the way, Dan is alive, well and still working, according to an acquaintance who met him for lunch in the Far East a few weeks ago.


This is Dan Rosenthal’s direct mail piece that brought in $12 million in orders in a few weeks.

The story goes that Dan went to the publisher with the idea, took two weeks to write and polish it and then walked away with 30% of the take.

What a concept.

No graphic design, no sidebars — just a 5-page paper-and-ink sales letter with a 1-page response form.

This is one of the all-time great sales letter openers for a financial newsletter. And with the price of gold closing in on three times the price per ounce when this letter mailed, it packs even more of a wallop.

Dan Rosenthal’s sales letter for the “Natural Resource Hunter.”

And here’s one of his print ads for the Silver & Gold Report.

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I’ll Teach Your to Master Transcendental Meditation In a Single Evening… (Gene Schwartz)

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Just a head’s up that I’ll be razing this site (yes, tearing it down) and rebuilding anew.

All of the current content will remain but my intention is to make the site many times more useful by creating lots of niched (and more accurate) categories, as well as improving navigation… and stuff like that.

And just when my fetish for Eugene Schwartz ads has tapered off, I find yet another one that I’ve never encountered before.

This one is for “Norvell’s 5 Minute Demystified Transcendental Meditation.”

Typical sort of ad that Gene probably cranked out before breakfast. It had a handful of insertions in 1975.

TM hardly had the same size fishing net as weight loss, beauty, make money and the like. But maybe, this ad came along too early?

Because I have taken the mystery out of Transcendental Meditation..

I’LL TEACH YOU TO MASTER TRANSCENDENTAL MEDITATION IN A SINGLE EVENING…

In Your Own Horne!Why Pay Hundreds Of Dollars To Be Given
A Gift THAT ALREADY EXISTS, NATURALLY, RIGHT
NOW, INSIDE YOUR VERY BODY!

Let me make this point perfectly clear: There is nothing really new about Transcendental Meditation, and the amazing physical effects that it brings!

Transcendental Meditation actually goes back several thousand years, to the Ancient Seers of Tibet, China and India, who actually demonstrated that they could control their body so completely utilizing it, that they could perform seemingly “impossible” feats when they let it protect them — such as literally walking over hot coals without being burned, or being buried alive for hours, and even days. without the slightest harm!

These great mystics believed that the awesome Power of Transcendental Meditation was buried deep in their body — and in the body of every living human being — awaiting only The proper “Key” to unleash it!

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Harry Browne shows why a Swiss bank has become one of the best places in the world for your money!

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Harry Browne
author of You Can Profit from a Monetary Crisis shows why a Swiss bank has become one of the best places in the world for your money!

His encyclopedic new book gives you all the facts — and explodes the myths — about Swiss banks today:

Myth: Swiss bank accounts are exclusively for millionaires, gangsters, tax evaders, and South American dictators.

Fact: Many hundreds of thousands of ordinary investors, large and small, have turned to Swiss banks for a safety and privacy no longer found anywhere in North America.

Myth: A new agreement between the Swiss and U.S. governments has eliminated the privacy of Swiss bank accounts.

Fact: Don’t you believe it! The traditional confidentiality of Swiss banks remains very much in force.

Myth: Swiss banks don’t pay interest; instead, you have to pay a large tax to open an account.

Fact: Swiss banks do pay interest, and you can legally avoid the taxes. This book shows you how. As Harry Browne says in it, he knows no one who bas ever paid the highly publicized Swiss negative interest tax.

Why have some 200,000 to 300,000 Americans moved their money out of U.S. and into Swiss banks?

Because here in the U.S. we have nonstop inflation. An ongoing recession. Steadily rising taxes. And,on top of it all, ever-increasing government scrutiny of each individual’s financial affairs. No wonder so many people are looking outside the U.S. for their economic salvation!

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BiphedAdrene Ad “Super Powerful Diet Pill”

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The ad for the “super-powerful” diet pill, BiphedAdrene, from Generix Labs and sold at www.biphedadrene.com has appeared in full page ads in The National Enquirer, The Globe and Parade.

It’s touted as a two-pronged fat attack and weight loss system consisting of of “a unique Amphetamine Provisional Complex for powerful appetite control, mood-elevation, and energy,” as well as  “an aggressive thermogenic compound for fat burning and stamina.” [Read more…] about BiphedAdrene Ad “Super Powerful Diet Pill”

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How To Turn Old Ads Into Gold

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It’s rare when you can pick up an ad that’s 40 years old and say: “Hey, great product… wonder if I can still get it?”

Rarer still when the copy sings and sells with almost no need for fine tuning all those decades later.

But that’s exactly what you’ll discover in these three print ads from the late mail order king, Paul Michael.

Among other things, Paul was the originator of the lift letter.

A lift letter is a sheet of note page sized paper that rides along with the main sales letter in a direct mail package.

It’s called a lift letter because its job is to LIFT response.

Paul’s original lift letter included one of best known (and copied) lines of mail order copy, “Frankly, I’m puzzled,” which Internet marketers occasionally parrot in their subject lines.

He’s also credited with helping produce as much as $100 million per year in sales for Greystone Press before going out on his own.

Here are three stellar examples of his copy in action.

All had widespread insertions in newspapers across the country in the 1970s.

You’ll find them of benefit whether you sell information products, packaged goods or services of almost any kind because these ads have all the elements of…

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Beverly Hills Youth Formula

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HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED COSMETIC SURGERY?

Before you decide, you should read this article carefully. We have spent over $100,000 for the right to bring you this information.

NOW AVAILABLE EXCLUSIVELY THROUGH THIS ANNOUNCEMENT, the original, revolutionary

Beverly Hills Youth Formula

If time has erased some of the youth and beauty from your facial skin, it’s only natural that you may have considered cosmetic surgery. But, before you make a final decision, you should carefully consider the following information.

Cosmetic surgery (what most people commonly call a “face lift”) is, first of all, very very expensive. Fees of thousands of dollars are not uncommon. And, like any surgery, it is a traumatic experience for your body. Also, plastic surgery often leaves visible, tell-tale scars which announce to the world that you are waging a losing war against time.

IS THERE AN EFFECTIVE ALTERNATIVE TO COSMETIC SURGERY?

We believe there is.

It is a remarkable formula developed after years of painstaking research and double-blind testing at some of America’s leading universities and medical facilities.

It is revolutionary.

It is a breakthrough in the truest sense of the word.

And, until now, it has been the exclusive preserve of a fortunate few. Legendary Hollywood and Broadway stars. Affluent men and women who often traveled clear across the country and gladly payed enormous fees for personal consultation and the privilege to use it.

It is the original Beverly Hills Youth Formula.

This article will tell you a little about its remarkable history. It will explain to you why we believe the Beverly Hills Youth Formula may well be the alternative to plastic surgery that you have prayed for. And it will tell you how you can, at last, actually experience the benefits of this exclusive formula without a cent of financial risk on your part.

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How to Trade Online AND WIN! (Trading ad)

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How to Trade Online AND WIN!

Wall Street Expert Reveals the Secrets to Beating the Street Online!

Look Before You Leap!

Would you jump out of an airplane without a parachute? Then why would you start making trades online before you learned what you were doing?

It’s crazy! But with deep discount brokers making it look so easy for individual investors, it’s no wonder consumers today are lulled into a false sense of security.

“Opening an online account is the easy part! It’s making successful trades that’s the hard part!”

Avoid the Dangers of Online Trading

Having an online account does not make you an online trader. Having an online account does not make you an expert.

What it does do is put you into a very dangerous situation, where one wrong trade could wipe out your savings in a matter of seconds…

Here’s another thought to chew on. Do you think the experts are trading manually? Would it surprise you if I told you 61% of all trade decisions are made by computers?

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“How I raised myself from a failure at 29 to become a $250 per day success!”

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Here’s Victor Schwab’s ad for Frank Bettger’s landmark book: How I Raised Myself from Failure to Success in Selling.

“How I raised myself from a failure at 29 to become a $250 per day success!”

…that’s the amazing personal story FRANK BETTGER tells you clearly, simply, step by step in his great book, “How I Raised Myself from Failure to Success in Selling.” Says DALE CARNEGIE, “When I met Frank Bettger at 29, he was nearly down-and-out. . . Then something
happened that raised him from defeat and despair. I know. I saw it happen. I saw him rise from a total failure to become one of the foremost salesmen in the nation.”

NO MATTER who you are or what you do—Frank Bettger’s remarkable book can help you tremendously. For he tells you the secrets of getting ahead that he learned in his almost unbelievable rise from total failure at 29 to high paid and highly honored business success . . . “secrets” you can begin to use as soon as you receive his book—yours FREE when you mail coupon below.

Yes, Frank Bettger tells you how any salesman can double or triple his income, turn disappointments into triumphs, close a greater percentage of sales, and make more sales calls each day. He gives precise directions on how to multiply your earning power … PRACTICAL, PROVEN techniques on the art of selling … of getting others to do what you want them to. Remember, this is the same information Mr. Bettger is paid $250 a day to teach other men. But let’s take a look at some of the success secrets you’ll find in this great book:

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At Age 68, How Did He Get A MILLION DOLLAR INSURANCE POLICY at the Preferred Rate?

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By any standard, this is brilliant DR, though it’s not technically speaking an insurance ad.

“At Age 68, How Did He Get A MILLION DOLLAR INSURANCE POLICY at the Preferred Rate?”

I’ve expressed my admiration for Cenegenics since they first came on the scene in 2008 with the ad.

“How Does This 69-Year-Old Doctor Have The Body Of a 30-Year-Old?”

Cenegenics knows their target market well

It’s not uncommon to see well-to-do 60 and 70-somethings at the gym, like Dr. Jeffry Life, squatting 400 pounds.

No need for a ton of copy here.

The buff image of Dr. Life juxtaposed over his approved million dollar life insurance application, plus the before and after benefit lists do the heavy lifting.

Who wouldn’t write a policy for this guy?


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Should She Accept It?

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Perhaps, no early 20th Century copywriter is as unheralded as Lillian Eichler Watson.

With the exception of Victor Schwab, it’s hard to think of a contemporary of hers who sold more books.

Eichler shared office space with a veritable all star team of copy talent at the ad agency, Ruthrauff & Ryan, which including on staff at various times: John Caples, Maxwell Sackheim, Victor Schwab, and founder Wilbur Ruthrauff.

When you read her copy, you have to pinch yourself to recall she employed this ingenious “problem-agitate-solution” approach in the 1920s.

Notice how she sucks the reader into the copy with the story of the woman’s dilemma in the text box.

Then she redirects this at the prospect with the line:  “Suppose she had asked you for advice? Would you have known what to tell her?”

But for the decline in manners in the States since this ad was published, the copy seems as fresh and relevant today.

The promise of this passage is a good example.

“Here are two volumes that solve every social difficulty, that protect from impulsive blun­ders; that do away with embarrassment and self-consciousness, that give poise, ease, confidence. Here are two volumes that tell you precisely what to do on every social occasion; what to say in every social contingency.”

Should She Accept It?

He had come suddenly, unexpectedly into her life. With a breath of romance and a first promise of love he had rushed into the loneliness of her little world — and captured her heart. Now it is her birthday and he has come to her with a gift. A bracelet — so delicately. wrought of golden threads that is seems a fairy cobweb. And there is a great, glowing sapphire where the slender threads are joined. Exquisite!

With a little cry of pleasure she reaches out for the gift. But a sudden thought checks her hand. She is fond of this man who has been so kind to her, who has brought beauty and sunshine into her life, but… she has known him less than a month. Will she be committing herself by accepting this expensive gift? Is it fair to her? Fair to him? What is correct? What would a worldly girl do?

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Dr. Frank Ryan Abdominal Fat Reducer: Diet to Hollywood Stars

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Dr. Frank Ryan’s Abdominal Fat Reducer is touted as the weight loss pill “provided to Hollywood stars by famous plastic surgeon.”

Frank Ryan is the late Beverly Hills plastic surgeon who was a rock star in his industry.

His last Twitter Tweet and picture of his Border Collie was taken just minutes before his car careened off the road and down an embankment.

Certainly, there are many positive connotations associated with Beverly Hills which diet pill producers have capitalized on for years.

The Frank Ryan Abdominal Fat Reducer seems to be replacing (at least in part) SCI’s former flagship weight loss product, AbGone.

Smartly and not surprising, the address in the coupon is Beverly Hills and not Canton, Ohio.

The weight loss pill’s main ingredients are listed as: Vitamin C, Chromium, Green Tea Extract, Dandelion Extract and Caffeine.

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